Wednesday, October 13, 2010

Journey Entry #5

Captains Log: It was a day like any other day in the tundra when we found our popsicle of a friend lying in the pale snow 30 meters off from our camp. It was about nine o' clock when we first started looking, the search only took half an' hour. I thought it was actually humorous how much he looked like a glazed icicle. One of the boys personaly thought that he died of stupidity, and not of the cold. "Oh well" I said " He couldn't support himself and now he's paid for his dullness." The boys laughed and we all headed back to camp leaving him there to stay frozen until the spring thaw.

3 comments:

  1. Zack you have a run-on, a misspelled word and a missing comma.

    Question: If these men don't care about the frozen miner why did they even go look for him? Also, wouldn't they consider it their duty to take care of the body? Lastly, what did this poor guy do to make these guys hate him so much.

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